Excuse me for a second... afjklas;frglkmvk;lreokldfld
Okay, I'm back. And let me say that was just wonderful! I read it from start to finish! I was so engrossed in this world you created, and I can't wait for more. I'm glad I started this a bit late, because I'm holding on to the hope that that means a new update will come sooner rather than later.
So, everything I loved: Your characterization is just marvelous! I've fallen so hard for the Cas/Sam friendship you got going on here. It's perfect. The interludes were great. I was so happy you gave a little past perspective. The way all of that affected Cas and changed him has made him such a powerful character. You did Sam so well. How he refused to give in, how no matter what he wanted to help... His story is so heart wrenching, and, God, all the emotions you made me feel... His stuggle tore me to pieces. Plus, Amnesia!Dean is such an interesting addition. I bet you had fun playing with his character. So many possibilities. I love how you portray his new relationship with Cas; the thin line between trust and mistrust and those little feelings he has for his friend in the back of his mind. Also, Jesus Christ you nearly broke my heart in two with that last bit about Jimmy and Sam. Wonderful! And Michael... I just love the route you took with him. He's a manipulative bastard and I love it.
I wait with burning anticipation for the next part.
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Date: 2012-01-06 05:41 am (UTC)afjklas;frglkmvk;lreokldfld
Okay, I'm back. And let me say that was just wonderful! I read it from start to finish! I was so engrossed in this world you created, and I can't wait for more. I'm glad I started this a bit late, because I'm holding on to the hope that that means a new update will come sooner rather than later.
So, everything I loved:
Your characterization is just marvelous! I've fallen so hard for the Cas/Sam friendship you got going on here. It's perfect. The interludes were great. I was so happy you gave a little past perspective. The way all of that affected Cas and changed him has made him such a powerful character.
You did Sam so well. How he refused to give in, how no matter what he wanted to help... His story is so heart wrenching, and, God, all the emotions you made me feel... His stuggle tore me to pieces.
Plus, Amnesia!Dean is such an interesting addition. I bet you had fun playing with his character. So many possibilities. I love how you portray his new relationship with Cas; the thin line between trust and mistrust and those little feelings he has for his friend in the back of his mind.
Also, Jesus Christ you nearly broke my heart in two with that last bit about Jimmy and Sam. Wonderful!
And Michael... I just love the route you took with him. He's a manipulative bastard and I love it.
I wait with burning anticipation for the next part.